lyrical_sunshine

No, not as bad. The first chapter seemed more rushed to me. I actually thought the development of the characters went a lot better in this one. :D keep it ...

Thanks Lyrical. .... Wow, this make me sound so perverted. :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:( I was just trying to show a different point of view on women in this world, because, well, it ...

"I've got a pretty intimate relationship with the wind. *grins*" ~Nessie Whatcha think about butterflies?

Wow, this is an extremely powerful poem. I'll be honest, I was expecting it to be really cliche, but you proved me wrong! You do need to wrok on your ...

I've had four things published in Teen Ink. I'm pretty sure they'd welcome an entry from Australia. And some of the submissions that I've read are excellent, not B-rated at ...

Marc: *sucking on a latte* Oh, look, they missed us! Don't you guys feel loved? Vanessa: What'd we miss? *takes a sip of chai tea* Marc: The usual. Angst, anger, ...

Uh...I'm pretty sure I'm Pisces, but I have no idea what that entails. But I know myself pretty well, so I'll give it a go. :D Positive Traits: Flexible, intelligent, ...

Nova flung the covers off and shot across the room grabbing her notebook. This is great! Now we actually have a chance of surviving in this forsaken… I think there ...

I think you're thinking of NYC. I hate that place and I haven't even been there. I got to Syracuse sometimes and I don't like it. To smelly and crowded. ...

lol, thanks for the tip. oh well, the end of semester's coming up soon, and then i'll have drama instead of journalism. :D not to mention that i'm a better ...

Don't forget that writing is an essential element to almost any career! I'm going into Law, and knowing how to write creatively is a must. Dude, totally. I love writing ...

My prologue is a sort of a flashback within a nightmare the MC is having. It's a bit of foreshadowing and a bit of her history all rolled into one. ...

*sigh* I've been trying to get through Tolkien forever, but so far I've only read "The Hobbit."

I don't know, i think anywhere you go writers are underpaid lol. unless you're J. K. Rowling or Stephen King. I've always wanted to go to Australia. Great surfing, eh?

A major in English w/ an emphasis in creative writing and a minor in journalism. :D I want to be an author, but I also plan on teaching. Probably at ...