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NARGLES! Long time no see! Happy review day to you, darling! I am not very good with poetry reviews so I'll leave this as a comment! For it's to broken ...

Hi there Anna! Happy review day to you! manisha here to review! Unrequited love is something most relate to so it is a story I can connect to. Dreaming about ...

Alora! You have such beautiful style of writing! I was gripped from the very start and loved reading every word! I have no critics for this one! Your description and ...

Heyya Kazza! manisha here to review! I enjoy reading books based on dystopian fiction. It seems to a genre that is currently "in". when writing dystopian fiction the writer should ...

Hi Slushy! manisha here to review! Happy Review Day! Oh, I like your avatar! Its funny! Alright to the review- I liked that this was written through the eye of ...

Hi umaima! manisha here to review chapter three of Heartbeats! I think its a cute touch that Satine always seems to get Jack's name wrong. "Jack hadn’t seen his brother ...

Hi Flame! manisha here to review! Firstly, I think you do not need to make this as two chapters. It is perfect length for a single chapter. Maybe you are ...

Hey reader! Compared to the others I think this one is by far the rest. The flow in this one is good. You have improved in this chapter. "That's where ...

Heyya ! manisha here to review for review day! I was happy to see that this chapter was going to be narrated by Ben. I find him very interesting, the ...

Heyya Celtic! manisha here to review! I haven't read the previous chapters so I'm sorry if I something wrong. "I mean , that you are more than just a human ...

Hi again Umaima! I'm here for chapter two! I'll jump right into the reviewing! You start with the continuation of the flashback. It is interesting to have a glimpse of ...

Hi you! manisha here to review! I know I should have got to reviewing this as soon as you had decided to name it. Better now then later, I guess ...

Hi there! manisha here to review! Feeling fresh this day? When I saw this chapter I went back to read chapter one. I really enjoyed chapter one and I can ...

Hello Teen! Happy Review Day! I loved this! You have such a good narrating style and I was glued to the story from the start. Your description is great too! ...

Hi there Kay! This was a great chapter. Its a great improvement over the other chapters. You have covered everything here. There is description, emotions and detail. I'm starting to ...