marnie.grace

Thank everyone. I'm glad you like it! I've taken in what you have all said and made the changes. Thanks! Here is the next part. This is my friends fav ...

I put this in other cause it really doesn't go into any others yet because I've just started, but here is what I've got so far. Enjoy. I hope you ...

All in all, the writing and the way it reads is really good. The only thing that caught my attention alot was the 'i' and a few words that you ...

This is really good! I love the whole idea and what going on. Theres only a few things I would change, but they are only small suggestions so dopn't take ...

You photography always amazes me :) These are wonderful! The flowers are so colourful and bright. I adore the pink one. It just so peaceful. Your pictures of the old, ...

this is an awesome job. Well done. I love that you've outlined the little details and the way you've made it flow with your model. You certainly would find something ...

the pictures are really good! I would have loved you live there. I love the one with the well. The road along side of the green and the brick well ...

The fact that I'm a chick sorta ruined the moment for me in this but all-in-all, it was a pretty good poem. Some of it wasn't making a great deal ...

Not to sound rude or anything, but of some reason I found this really funny. I'm not sure why :? Anyway, this is pretty good. I like it :) The ...

Agreeing with peanutgalley.This is amazing and you are one great writer. Looking forward to some of your other work. I'm not going to repeat everything that has already been said ...

I love this, nicely written. Well done. But it's still raining outside And the grass is still greener And you'd rather be wrapped up In your distracting life Than what ...

Hi, this is basically going to sound like what everyone else has said but you wanted reviews so I'm giving you reviews Kalyug- doesn't say anything about what you are ...

The first part of the first chapter; Something New. Once again, and comments/reviews are more then welcome. Hope everyone likes it :) ------------------------------------------------------------------

So basically people have pretty much already covered everthing but just to add a few little things. The most important thing is you need to divide this into paragraphs not ...

Before I start on the whole reviewing thing I would just like to say that i really do love this! Great job :D This are really simple and easy 1. ...