marnie.grace

Message from author: just the preface to the my story that I'm working on and still working on. But anywho hope you like it and any reviews are more than ...

This seems like a interesting story in the making. Really loving it. There was only a few things that I picked up on but as I read the other reviews, ...

This a going to be really late but I love this story so I though I mite review. They are only simple and theres only a few but they still ...

This is good, really good. It puts you in the characters mind a lot better and it's exiciting because you haven't given any information about the people (apart from the ...

That was great. Good job! It was really interesting the way you wrote it, good interesting I mean. I don't know a whole lot of stuff on grammer and things ...

I love this. You have some creative writing but there were a few things that I picked out on as well as some other people. Most of these few things, ...