marnie.grace

All in all, the writing and the way it reads is really good. The only thing that caught my attention alot was the 'i' and a few words that you ...

This is really good! I love the whole idea and what going on. Theres only a few things I would change, but they are only small suggestions so dopn't take ...

The fact that I'm a chick sorta ruined the moment for me in this but all-in-all, it was a pretty good poem. Some of it wasn't making a great deal ...

Not to sound rude or anything, but of some reason I found this really funny. I'm not sure why :? Anyway, this is pretty good. I like it :) The ...

Agreeing with peanutgalley.This is amazing and you are one great writer. Looking forward to some of your other work. I'm not going to repeat everything that has already been said ...

I love this, nicely written. Well done. But it's still raining outside And the grass is still greener And you'd rather be wrapped up In your distracting life Than what ...

Hi, this is basically going to sound like what everyone else has said but you wanted reviews so I'm giving you reviews Kalyug- doesn't say anything about what you are ...

So basically people have pretty much already covered everthing but just to add a few little things. The most important thing is you need to divide this into paragraphs not ...

Before I start on the whole reviewing thing I would just like to say that i really do love this! Great job :D This are really simple and easy 1. ...

This a going to be really late but I love this story so I though I mite review. They are only simple and theres only a few but they still ...

This is good, really good. It puts you in the characters mind a lot better and it's exiciting because you haven't given any information about the people (apart from the ...

I love this. You have some creative writing but there were a few things that I picked out on as well as some other people. Most of these few things, ...