marnie.grace

Thank everyone. I'm glad you like it! I've taken in what you have all said and made the changes. Thanks! Here is the next part. This is my friends fav ...

The first part of the first chapter; Something New. Once again, and comments/reviews are more then welcome. Hope everyone likes it :) ------------------------------------------------------------------

This seems like a interesting story in the making. Really loving it. There was only a few things that I picked up on but as I read the other reviews, ...

That was great. Good job! It was really interesting the way you wrote it, good interesting I mean. I don't know a whole lot of stuff on grammer and things ...