maverick_09

-laughs- That was great. Favorite part: "until it's bearable." This really made me think about how I fight with myself when I write poetry, but it made me take a ...

One thing I want to clarify, Th ending shows the MC drowning herself? I'd like to know this as well.. but I love how you left it up to us, ...

Hokay, here's hoping this is in the right spot. Recently I attended a writing workshop, and the person running it gave us this prompt: "I didn't know I was afraid ...

rofl, I didn't even make the Grease connection o_O! Thanks for pointing that out, and for the welcome and good critique as well. I definitely get what you're saying for ...

It's just something I wrote one night this past summer. I don't have a melody for it yet, but here it is. For reference, I'm going to pair it with ...

I agree with most of the users above me. It's a good basis, but it is very vague and somewhat bland. Try to spice up your word choice and add ...

Well that was pretty much awesome. You're very talented. (: I really liked the strong imagery that remained consistent throughout the entire poem. My favorite line is "the jagged edge ...

(: Loved it. It's an interesting topic because to the drivers of the world bicyclists can be hugely irritating, and this is just throwing it back in all of our ...