maverick_09

One thing I want to clarify, Th ending shows the MC drowning herself? I'd like to know this as well.. but I love how you left it up to us, ...

I agree with most of the users above me. It's a good basis, but it is very vague and somewhat bland. Try to spice up your word choice and add ...

Well that was pretty much awesome. You're very talented. (: I really liked the strong imagery that remained consistent throughout the entire poem. My favorite line is "the jagged edge ...