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This poem is really interesting. I have a few minor issues though: It is approval, nonchalance, dismay, encouragement, dismissal, and enthusiasm. I like the ideas but these two lines throw ...

I actually really like the email format, it makes this a bit different to other stories! I really like this story it's funny and so true, reminds me of horrific ...

o.O intriguing! I really like this, and want to read more! A few nitpicky issues with syntax things, particularly this section: 'What can possibly be the reason someone kill this ...

I love this poem, and totally agree with the message! I like the way you've taken a serious point and conveyed it in a humorous way, and the rhythm and ...

I really liked this poem, it has a lovely flow to it and I liked the emotion and the story it seems to tell. However it does need a bit ...

I loved this poem. Okay so maybe the rhythm isn't perfect, but the sentiment is beautiful and it's so emotive. I thought the stanza that was slightly more positive and ...