meggwriting

Alright, this was a short story I wrote for a class. My first historical fiction, and one of my first short stories. Rip it apart in reviews please, I want ...

Ring, Ring. I grabbed my cell phone on my bed, flipped it open and with my, a cheerful tone (my, a cheerful? Shouldn't this be something like 'and with a ...

(I hate men...they make life too complicated.) I hate you for the names you said, the mean things you did and the tears I shed. I love you, you stole ...

Aww, thanks Sain!

...Ugh. Mine... Only one I told my mom I'd take after getting my hair cut. She wants me to show people to prove my haircut is fine. Little does she ...

...Punctuation. I do a little poetry and have learned you get your head ripped off for no punctuation, or incorrect punctuation. I really liked this (mainly because of rhyming! I ...

Moonkit yawned and blinked her heather-colored open. She tilted her ears toward a sound outside of the den. Voices. She yawned once more, and stretched, purring as her muscles began ...

Prologue “But, are you sure that there is absolutely nothing you can do for him?” “Positive, ma’am. I am deeply sorry, but the fever is incredibly high an’ won’t come ...

I woke with a start, in a cold sweat; I realized I was shaking violently. After calming my self down I glanced at the alarm clock next to my bed ...

Riley, Riley wake up. >This is dialogue, it needs quotations. All dialogue does. Different dialogue between different people need to become different paragraphs. Each time a new person speaks, make ...

Don't worry, you're fine!

Name: Moonkit (paw, beam) Gender: she-cat Personality: Moonkit has alway been curious and bright. She has always questioned things, like how cats got to StarClan, how Medicine Cats remembered all ...

The glory to behold the sight, Of a guardian angel taking flight. Ring a bell and let lose a thousand tings, Watch as a thousand angels get their wings. Off ...

I really liked this story...I'm normally not one for romantic stories, but this I really liked! It was well written, and engaging. I felt like I was trapped in the ...

Thanks guys! And Fries, I know Weird Eye is freaky, that was simply an accident, I was just messing with modifying skin and....tada!