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Re: A Tale From Someone With a Tail.
My first reaction: confusion! I couldn't get what you were talking about. Then I read to the end, and I sort of ended up getting it. Are you trying to ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Avari
I'm agreeing with everybody else so far. It was short, and it felt really cut off. Was this an introduction or, like, the start to a chapter? It felt like ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: The Wildflower
I really like your poem! It had rhythm and rhyme, two things I like in poetry. The only comment I would make is the fourth line, that starts with "of ...
Feb 19, 2011