mellophone7

Thank you for helping me with this. I always seem to have trouble separating poems into stanzas, so thanks for giving some suggestions for that. Also, looking back, the "Uh ...

This was very, very good. So deep, emotional, and sad. But sad in a good way. I really have no other comments or nitpicks other than to say that I ...

This is extremely beautiful. I really have no nitpicks or complaints for it. It drew me in right away, and made me want to keep reading. Very, very well written. ...

Cute, MOIMOW. Real cute. :) Yes, I loved reading this! The flow and rhythm was just great, and I didn't see any grammatical mistakes. Great job!

I don't know if I'm using the right words, here, but this poem seemed very light, graceful, and airy to me. Simply beautiful. I loved it so much. I didn't ...

Really, really sad, but extremely well-written. I didn't find any grammatical errors, and I noticed no problems with it otherwise. Please keep writing! Your work is excellent.

This is really good. I like how you capture exactly how you're feeling in the moment, and also your style of writing. I can feel everything. I didn't notice any ...

This was really good. You relayed your story very well, and I could feel everything you were talking about. Great job, and keep it up!

This is SO beautiful. With every line you give, I get a clear image in my head with what is happening. I can't really say much else. This is a ...

Wow. I really love this; it's so powerful, and sends a clear message. Great job with this!

I really like this. It was just so beautiful. Any nitpicks I have other people already noted on. Keep writing, please!

Oh, I love this! I know exactly what this is like. This happens every morning (except when I wake up before the alarm). Great job! Keep it up!

I love this. Most of it I can relate to. Lots of emotion, great flow. I absolutely loved it.

I really don't think I can say much else that hasn't already been said, other than I really liked this. It's so true to real life. I also loved the ...

Wow. This was extremely well written. I could feel everything you were trying to say. No mistakes, either. Great job!