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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Do Not Ask Me To Remember

    Hi! This is a very beautiful poem. I'm sorry about your grandmother's situation, I hope that she fights through it. The lines that really stuck with me were : "Just ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 10

    Hey, Tortwag! Mephis here for a late review (here anyway)! So, I should start out by saying that this review may seem very messy. It's 1 AM in the morning ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    Hey, Stegosaurus! So I actually really liked this poem. This has a certain feeling to it that I can't really grasp, but I love it! Should I call it abstract? ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dream Sequence 4/5

    Hey steampowered! In this short review, I'd like to point out things that are not grammatical errors but things I noticed in the actual writing and storyline. I feel like ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Harry's Godcousin

    Hey Emerald, happy review day! So I think the idea with this fan fiction was actually pretty great. I like the idea of there being someone else besides Harry who ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Part One Edited

    Hey RPP! I gotta say, this was a very interesting piece of work. Full of action and awesome characters. I especially liked Krystal and her dialogues. I would like to ...

    Jul 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: Little girl

    Hey! So won't say that this is bad or anything. I respect how people write, what they want to write, and well, everyone has things that they want to work ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Modern Jerks

    Hey, TealElephant! So, I have one small thing to say about this piece of art. Just one small thing. The title was creative and the content was awesome, but I ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Cosmic Eulogy

    Hey, RoyalHighness! So I really liked the content of this, although it felt kind of awkward to read. What I mean is that the line breaks are placed very frequently, ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Diaboli (Red Velvet Chapter 1)

    Hey, again! :D (I hope you don't see me as a creepy stalker by now!) So, this is very interesting. I've never read a story like this before, although that ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Delicate One (Red Velvet Prologue)

    Hey, so we meet again! I was just browsing through your works after the Cinderella story, because I wanted to read more of what you could write. And look what ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Cinderella's Happily Ever Never

    Hello there, bloodybelle01! So this was definitely a very interesting story. Kind of like those 'fairy-tales for adults' type of stories. Of course, this was much more nicer if I ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: unconventionaL

    Hey Maverick! well o,bviously i dont have any grammar point.outs for you, ha-ha! Nicely done! This poem was highly interesting and I really loved it. To say, I felt mildly ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: Not A Wonderland

    Hey, englishbreakfastgirl! I'd first like to say that this was a very deep and analytical prologue. You have described 'life' in a way that didn't make me confused in any ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Girl Who Became an Island

    Hey, Wasabi! What a good day to write a review! So frankly, I loved this idea. It was so original and kind of childish, almost, like a short fairytale, as ...

    Feb 22, 2015


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings