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michaeld

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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter's love.

    You have so much talent and it definitely, definitely shows in this piece! I couldn't keep my eyes off of this beautiful creation! The way you had the separate poem ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Garage Girl - chapter un

    This, simply put, was phenomenal. You definitely need to keep this up! I loved the word choice and the whole piece flowed perfectly, which most authors, including I, envy quite ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Prelude & Fugue No. 18

    This was a beautifully written, amazing piece of work! You should be proud! I think that the word choice was just right, no grammar mistakes that I could see, but ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Days I Consider Atheism

    This was a beautiful, beautiful piece. I enjoyed every moment of reading it! I really liked this one quote. It sent chills down my spine. if there is no Love, ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That's So Gay!

    I think that this was an amazing poem! It definitely has a lot of potential. I don't think you need to do anything different with it, it's perfect the way ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.

    This was hilarious, witty, amazing and I would have never thought of it! I've read books with similar ideas and they were pretty much this, but much longer! What was ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 21

    This poem was amazing! I read it over and over and over and loved it even more every time I read it again! I even read it to my mum ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I

    Ok this will be really short. First of all, I really loved this work! This was quite fantastic! The second thing that I have to say is that I love ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Black Box

    This poem was AMAZING! You definitely get my "like"! I don't have ANYTHING to say about the story itself, I just have a few grammatical errors :) Here we go! ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Woman at the Well

    First of all, this was simply astounding! I love this piece so much it's not even funny! I love it so much, I think I killed it with my love! ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a frozen window pane

    I absolutely adored this piece! I'm speechless! Now onto the nitpicky-ness xD I’m the breath scratching the surface I think you should bring the rest of the phrase up making ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Puzzle

    I loved this poem so much! Your poetry is indescribable and I look up to your writing skills! You are very, very, very talented! Now back to this poem :P ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'll Lie

    This was beautiful! I loved every word of it! I did find a few nit picky things though You're too innocent, I so often think I don't know why; Must ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Folded Up

    Simply put; I'm speechless. Your imagery is just fantastic! I loved your descriptive words especially. Most people have either not enough description, causing the story to feel flat, or they ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Saxophones in Fall

    First of all, I would like to say that this poem was, simply put, amazing! I loved the description and the word choice was phenomenal! Jasmine perfumes the woolly foreboding ...

    Sep 25, 2011


But even the worst decisions we make don't necessarily remove us from the circle of humanity.
— Wes Moore, The Other Wes Moore