mikepyro

The glint of The Tall Man’s rifle shines off into the desert and stretches across the land. Grasping the crafted handle tight in hand, he marches towards the sloping plateau ...

i must admit I did take issue with the overreliance of showing rather than telling, but it fits in this style, and that must be taken into account. The voice ...

I have a finished novel called Animal I'm posting up now. First 2 chaps up but more coming soon. It's quite the excellent piece if I do say so myself. ...

You already know how awesome I am, why not review more? Like always I'll return the favor with review to ur stuff. :D

I rarely find comedies on the site that are actually funny. Most are awful fan fic crap or sad attempts at random humor. This made me laugh. That doesn't happen ...

if you wish I would love another reader for my novel Animal. It's actually being looked at by agents now so here's hoping I get it to print. I have ...

I'm not great when it comes to poetry reviews but I will say there is strength and a nice voice that ties the flow together. I must say the "i ...

mothers - mother's spell out the 9 and 49. though the doc's age should be cut. I really liked this. Simple, powerful, nice little meta piece. I usually don't like ...

and his hair is rumpled - I'd cut this line, doesn't add much and is a continuation of a already linked line. , “guitar hands - Change the comma to ...

My name is George Fuller. This is my life. *** Sarah brought me the mail today. She carried the envelopes tucked squarely under her armpit despite the fact that both ...

John wakes. Spirals of light flash and dance across his sight. His head spins and he shuts his eyes to keep the nausea at bay. His face, raw and tender, ...

I'm general premed biology but am leaning towards endocrinology and the immune system. :)

Hmm, see I really enjoyed this piece. More than I expected. You have nice detail and a solid sense of voice that flows throughout here. My major problem was that ...

Time for me to link two reviews together, aww yeah! I really enjoyed this piece , much more than I did your piece Sin. While both are very well written ...

Alex pushed the end button on his battery-drained phone and placed it in its cradle. It laid there, the soft buzz of static fading as it powered down. He crossed ...