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wow! im not too keen on poems to be honest (i've done too many in class) but your poem really hit me. If its a first try then im amazed! ...

wow! i loved this! I liked the 'spin' you took on the theme of abortion. I have no critisism.. i loved it. I also liked the psalm you wrote at ...

I really enjoyed reading this post and i only have one major critisism. I feel that at the start you seem to be too detailed about the characters route etc. ...

i loved this but i disagree slightly with sam. I feel that if you described how he felt while digging up the graves would ass unnessary detail as it appears ...

cool - very good. I enjoyed it. I think it was a good idea to not have put it in romance. It would be unfair to just put it in ...

whoa! That was amazing. It confused me a hell of a lot but i honestly loved that. It reminds me of 'The Dreamcatcher' by Stephen King. Is it slightly based ...

i like this. so very true! I felt very upset at the start.... but i resisted the urge to smudge my mascara lol. As usual i don't know what to ...

:D You continued it!!!!!! I enjoyed the second part to the chapter but i think that you spoke a bit too much about how bad the characters' parents were for ...

I like this. I take it that the voice is Death and that during one part the man is in Hell. I think this is very unusual and that it ...

I don't usually read long pieces on this site but i thought that this one looked very interesting so i gave it a good read. I'm glad i did... i ...

I liked this - really caught my attention. I don't think you should apoligise for it being slightly depressing. In my opinion i think that the best pieces are written ...

I disagree wit firestarter (no offence). I think that if you lenthened the poem you would lose the overall effect. I think that it shows how sudden death is and ...

I think this is a really good poem and i dont know exactly but i think it has a sort of emotive factor thing goin on. I liked the way ...

I can't blame you for liking this piece to bits. I think its is amazing! It's really unusual and i think its a very intelligent piece of writing. I am ...

I really really really loved this! I think its one of the best short stories ive seen 2day (beleive me ive read far 2 many!). I loved the way you ...