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minimonkey701

minimonkey701

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: And they came, but you didn’t.

    This is really good. there are a few mistakes well one or two. In the first line you should change meet to met. I don't think you should start a ...

    Apr 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Dear Princess

    I dont Know what piece This poem is based off but it is very good. I feel like you use very descriptive words and feelings. i love poetry and i ...

    Feb 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: She Is Me

    Holy cow. This is so descriptive. I am in tears right now. I wanted to say that this is very good. I feel like you should write more and make ...

    Feb 10, 2015


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