mintantlers

I really like how the story flows along really nicely. There's great characterizaton and the characters have their own personality that you can easily tell apart. The beginning is a ...

I really loved your story. It's a really nice ending that you put, I liked how the main character's perspective changed when he had that dream. But the way that ...

Hi! I really liked how you made the plot. I really wanted to know more about Mr. Wizard and why he helped Chirp. Why was Chirp so trusting? I want ...

Hey! I think that you wrote pretty well. There were a few typos like you wrote spin instead of spine. :(':smt075') (':smt075') Several grammar mistakes, (I suck at grammar too!) ...

Really bloody and violent sounding story. I really liked how you ended it. Good descriptions on the monster that was chasing the protagonist, I liked how you described the main ...

jennydragonlover: I enjoyed all three parts of The Chess Set! I really liked how you ended it, it seems right to end there and not continue. I think that it ...

I'm back again! Jennydragonlover your writing still amazes me more, the ending of your part 2 wasn't a really good place to end in my opinion. I like the way ...

Hi jennydragonlover! You told me to reply your writing so here I am! It's really good and suspenseful part to end. Great and realistic dialogue that makes the characters seem ...