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Despite what both of the reviewers above have said, I find this poem very powerful. I understand the emotion, and I really think it is beautiful. Better than anything I ...

This is beautiful! But I have one comment. The ryhme scheme seems a bit funky, or off beat haha. Maybe it's just me? :p Overall I really liked this. It's ...

That girl was good, brave, and responsible. Yet she was the one dead, and it was my fault. I heard a bang on my front door. I heard my mom ...

I understand what you mean, although this is vague. You are half of your parents, but you just want to be you. Someone new. (unintended ryhme, right there. haha.) I ...

I like this a lot, but what did you mean by this? "To reach the ocean, is to reach the end of life" The end of life? To me it ...

Hey, this is absolutely brilliant... just saying. :] I really like how you flipped the characters around, and how you set up the poem. It's genius! Just liek the person ...

Hey Calben, I really like this. :] I mean, I don't fully understand what this means.. but it's worded beautifully. haha. Feel free to PM me and tell me what ...

As said already, capitalize your I's, and you'll be all set. I really like how you are very straight foward in your poem, with one certain message that you want ...

Woah... this story is really good.. strange, scary, and just completely breathtaking. I loved it. I was so scared throughout the whole thing! I was hoping Cheyenne would escape, though. ...