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Valin is a prince. Her parents committed high treason. The truth hit Carmenia like a thunderbolt, and brought her to her knee's. She bowed her head. "Thysoli ti, o eisi ...

Oh, here's a picture of what Carmenia's hair actually looks like, though perhaps it's a bit longer... THE GIRL WITH THE HAIR IS NOT CARMENIA.

Yes, it does...

*puzzled look* And how would you know that? As a matter of fact, I don't talk like that... Oh well. I'm going to post soon...

Okay....um...dude. ;D

Okay...so...he wouldn't just let her steal information about the Human army...would he? EDIT: Ahh...I reread it for the third time and finally caught the negotiation part. By the way, is ...

Hmmm...alright. Thanks for changing it to "bastard". Oh, and another thing, you make her sound as though she's still considering stealing information, even after Valin found her out. I'm thinking ...

It's fine. Your post is okay except for the part when she says "dick". Definitly not her. Say "bastard" instead. Personally, I agree with Dono...but I'd hate to have to ...

Sounds fine to me. I originally thought that it would be better to let some time pass, just to get all of the plot we can get, but that sounds ...

'Kay everyone...I'm gonna try and add those new character to the list soon...

How about...The Blood Stone? Kinda lame...I know...

After packing up his camp, Ruben left, carrying only a small cloth pack. He treaded lightly on the ground cushioned with pine needles. Much to his suprise, he felt lonely. ...

Marrissa glanced at Gray. He was kinda cute. She smiled slightly and tried to keep her focus on the teacher. It was rather difficult. She stole a look at the ...

Smudging the gold paint just a bit with his thumb, 26-year-old Tyler Coleman leaned back to admire his work. It was a beautiful abstract painting of the sun rising, its ...

handsome, *Carmenia bats eyelashes* "Wal he' aw mi' so ye ca' 'ave 'em!" *Finn roughly yanks Carmenia's hair*