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Re: First 1-and-a-half Pages of Draft.
I don't like the first paragraph. Maybe you should just delete it altogether and incorporate the necessary information in with the 2nd one?
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: The Lottery by Shirley Jackson
Oh I read this too (in the 8th grade). I loved it. The theme that we took from it was that traditions aren't always right. It left me totally speechless.
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Forever Young
I think it should be longer...this doesn't really stick out to me.
Nov 7, 2008