mistielovesyou

I see how it would make more sense as a short story. Thank you so much! If you'd like to read an edited version, go here:

Thank you for this flattering and helpful review! If you'd like you can read the edited version of the poem here:

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I could've edited it a little more.

Oh I understand. I guess that title was a little vague and open ended for what I actually wrote. I could have narrowed it down.

Uhm you don't have to be rude about it. A poem you don't like isn't a personal affront to you. This poem is about something that I went through, I ...

What's interesting about this poem was the sort of empty feeling it left me with. Like there could be more added to it. I don't know if you did it ...

In the beginning of this, I was a little confused as to who which characters were which. Just make it a little clearer because they all have same-sounding names. You ...

This goes very fast. There's no room to get to know the character, or to really understand the story. I understand that this is 'short stories' but this was a ...

I really liked this. I liked the way you described the woman, and how easily the reader could understand her. You could see her life, her fears, everything. All without ...

This was pretty good, although like the first reviewer, I don't completely understand what you're talking about. If you want to, you can add details to make the symbolism more ...

This is okay, but the moral is unclear. Maybe it needs a rewrite? I didn't really get the fact that he buried the fish, only that he had forgotten about ...

I love this a lot, but I wish I could know more of what the speaker was talking about. It was really good, though. I especially liked the first paragraph. ...

You wrote your descriptions very well, and this is a good story. It's so very realistic and I like how you left the problem out of it, so we don't ...

This story was good, albeit a little disjointed. I was confused with the second "flashback", and I thought he had come back to life. The ending was nice though, and ...

I thought this was really good and well organized. I liked how the whole end half of the story was just a foolish prediction, and I liked the little plot ...