miyaviloves

I liked the first two lines actually :) I liked the whole thing, I can't say anything bad about it! Meevs x

i have to agree with Liz about this. And just a word of advice, if people have taken the time to read your work its good for them to leave ...

On the outskirts to a small town there was a fire. The family was trapped inside and there was no way to calm the blaze. It seemed as if it ...

I'm gonna crit this as i read it yay! so here i go :D Millions. They say the old man was worth that much It said so on his bank ...

Posted Ice Cubes #20 its rated so it wont be on the main page, its also very short but hey, it builds tension that way ;)

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Ok, first things first I did like this, but found it a little too hard to read. The hearts of the Lifeless Ones the only prize worth contending for in ...

Always and forever, you promised I'd be yours The opening line is a little cliché, i mean for an opening sentence you should really grab the attention of the reader, ...

Well, I have to make all this shorter for the creative writing portoflio thing, they put together everyone who took the course's work and put it into a book i ...

Noo you cant leave it there! I'm running out of wrods to say how much i really like POD, i will make sure to look out for #18 I'm guessing ...

Yeah, I must admit this was such a strange topic to be given, we had to make the ivy resemble something, our teacher suggested abuse so In my lack of ...

Ok I really liked this, its emotional and you have kept it original, Only thing I didn't like was: Send nausea to my every curve. Wring my tears to pool. ...

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Noo it stopped, i wanted to see what happened when she got back! Like i said before she wasn't free and well, she really isn't in this one, emotional and ...

I liked this, but I dont think she is finally free, I think that she is not free atall now lol, might just be my take on it. I think ...