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mizz-iceberg

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Park Bench Pageant

    Hey there, Inkwell! I love this poem for many reasons. I love the smooth flow of it, the way each line flows so smoothly into the next and the words ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: there she inscribed

    A/N The lack of punctuation and capitalization is intentional. I think without the punctuation, the poem a swift flow. Opinions greatly appreciated as always! :) I hush, cry your bitter ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: to the ducks swimming in ditchwater

    To the ducks swimming in ditch water: I apologize, extending these hearty palms towards you on behalf of my brothers and sisters speeding and crashing around us both. Believe me ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: An Empty Stoup

    Heya Perse! I love how whenever I drop by the forums there's always something new and delicious by you. I agree very heartily and passionately with the subject and theme ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Visiting Modernity

    ... Your return was on a dark night, when the fireflies of modernity dotted the night and it wasn't silent because it was the night of today. Your children were ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews galore! (Open for Business)

    A customer! *tackles Coral" Ahem. So! Your review shall be ready by tomorrow evening! xD

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: The 2010 Statistics

    My favourite part: 3.29 review to work ratio YWS is incredible.

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Starlight

    Hi! Coral, that was breathtakingly beautiful! I really have nothing to critique here and my review will be just gushing and praising. First let me say this, I love the ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Want My Childhood Back

    Hey Ehte, I found this poem chillingly familiar to an Indian song I know called Wo Khaghaz ki Kashti (That Paper Boat). Here are the lyrics in English. I'm wondering ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Snow Adrift

    Ahoy there! (get it? xD) I couldn't really find much wrong with this poem. I thought it was refreshingly beautiful. However, I would like to point out a few things. ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Pick the color of my UKULELE

    Wood. Then you can paint it and draw designs on it the way you want.

    Dec 31, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews galore! (Open for Business)

    Hi! I'm Mizz Iceberg. I'd love to do a review for you. :) I will try my best to hand out the reviews as promptly as possible. What I'm willing ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    Hello Pink! Could you please have a look at this for me. Thank you very much!

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: You died, tonight.

    The ending made me gigglesnort. I have felt that way, way to often. I love how it was utterly, and absolutely cliche in the beginning--or so I had thought. The ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Thorns & Roses [1.1]

    Hey Pink! Let me just first get down to the few things I had a problem with. I'd like to understand Kevin a little better. I think you could describe ...

    Dec 31, 2010


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings