mizz-iceberg

Actually i did it unintentionaly...hmm..

WHAT AM I? What am I? Not Who am I? Less obvious than A grain of sand in a sandbox, Like a drop of water in the sea, Or like ...

Great imagery and vivid descriptions. my eyes begin to feel like they weigh a million pounds Love that line! Read this phrase slowly and loudly: I look down at my ...

beautiful. Great imagery. Yes you could use some puntuation pointer but i'm in a tearing hurry right now. I will however try and get back to ur and leave a ...

Did not catch any mice ;) So hats off!! Loved it. I especially liked your poem because it's very meaningful and deep. -icy,

THE MONKEY RULES ALL!!

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about

Kitty15 has pretty much pointed out all the mistakes that I noticed. & and thank you so much for PM-ing!! I didn't know this chapter was up... I was a ...

Sorry it took me so long to getting to read your poem. But I finally did and I have to say I agree Sureal, it's definitely an improvement from Rapunzel's ...

rather short. POst more. I really do enjoy your writing. Really amuses me!

How about Glossed lips? Yes I have o agree with the above that this piece was excellent. What I really like about this is it's nice and short and simple. ...

I agree with Gwenevire. it would be nice if you space out your writing into nice small paragraphs. You are turning off a lot of writers as It's hard on ...

The beginning was wonderful but I wasn't to impressed with the rest.

I was doing a bit of research for a friend of mine concerning fantasy writing. We had noticed that there were way too may Cliches in fantasy and that with ...

I totally agree with Kim. I especially loved the last stanza.