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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Lavender Project: Chapter I

    There were a few things I saw that I'd like to show you. I'll put them in green and (parantheses). The Fortune Teller She stared off into space, thinking of ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sister Trap

    I have to agree with ElementalBlood. There was a lot going on and I got lost. I know you said you were trying to write a short story, but you ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Something to Live With

    I thought it was good. Definately something I would be interested in reading more of. There was one sentence I found a little repetitive: There are papers and passports with ...

    Jan 15, 2011


“Such nonsense!" declared Dr Greysteel. "Whoever heard of cats doing anything useful!" "Except for staring at one in a supercilious manner," said Strange. "That has a sort of moral usefulness, I suppose, in making one feel uncomfortable and encouraging sober reflection upon one's imperfections.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell