mnesomeye

Firstly. The reviewer above is, like myself, a grammar hoar. However, I really do feel that her grammar is so proper that it's missed the point of this work entirely. ...

I'm not a fan of 'overall' reviews, so I've done another of my nit-picks. Ain't I fab? :roll: So on Wednesday, November 19th, 2008 No, far too many commas here. ...

Hiya, c'est moi *bows* and I decided that just signing your guest book wasn't enough. So I'll give you a couple of reviews, as most of the comments on here ...

Hi, it's me again! I'm going to give you a proper once-over this time; a Mnesomeye special! *claps* Be warned, though; I'm a perfectionist, and I love nothing more than ...

I understand that people think loveablelittlesocks' critique was too harsh, but most of it needed to be said. Perhaps a little more tactfully, though. ;) However, seeing as LLS (loveablelittlesocks) ...

*pulls out her pastel pink, glass nibbed fountain pen again* They were smothering me, just as they had done right after [s]all of it happened[/s] it had all happened / ...

WOO - new chapters! But I've decided I'm fed up of just leaving you fan-girlish comments; they aren't beneficial to anyone. *laughs* So I've decided to take my nit-pickiness to ...

Hiya! Decided to take up your challenge and rip your plan-type-thing to shreds (although, in fairness, it's not really a 'challenge' as ripping to shreds is how I review! ;) ...

YAY, 21st chapter! However, as with every brilliant story, I scoured it demonically for errors. It was obvious how he felt about her… to everyone but her. Put emphasis on ...

Hiya antipop! Why do you have to read 'My Dearest Madylene' first? This story doesn't appear to be related... unless they come together towards the end, or something? Or - ...

Oh, the ANGUISH! *cries* This was beautiful - drop-dead, fantastically, amazingly beautiful. However, as with every beautiful piece, there comes the itch to make it better - *whips out a ...

Hiya Vox! I've come to rescue you and make sure that this piece of work is "uh, really good". :P This review will probably be very picky, but... well, you ...

First thoughts? Dang - this is good. I really enjoyed reading this, to the point that it became a challenge to try and find any sort of flaw. Well uh ...

This is... interesting. But I'm not sure what the poem is about, so I can't critique it. Can you tell me? OK that sounded rather bad - I understand it's ...

EDIT: Ok! Let's get reviewin'! *pulls out her special pastel pink, glass nibbed pen* This first part of my review seems - no, IS - very mean, but seriously, there ...