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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jerk

    Ok, so I suggest that you put more sentences in each paragraph. I realize that this is a short story and I can understand your story just fine, it's just ...

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Figure Skating

    I honestly liked it, although I have a few suggestions! 1. I've noticed that you're missing a few words here and there, and your writing gets kind of confusing when ...

    Apr 22, 2011


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
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