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monarcas

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Accidental Run-In

    thanks for the comment and yes this is a true story lol i wrote it how i saw it this story was about the most exciting time of my life ...

    Oct 30, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Accidental Run-In

    i hope more people read my essay. i did it in class for a project i want to see what other people think about my essay i think its a ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Accidental Run-In

    Thank you man yeah im a fix it more then im new to this

    Oct 16, 2009


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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