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Re: Critic and Writer
Overall, I liked the idea of the poem. It needs some structural work in the "writer" section. and you have WAAAAY to much punctuation. Poetry is not a book that ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: The Quiet
Wow that was extremely good... You have an interesting style that I don't could be rivaled or copied. I like the part about the squirrel...:) Keep writing!!! I would love ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Does He See?
Very very good, deep and makes you think... A few things [qoute] Or the grave we dealt? [/qoute] im not sure but is it supposed to be graves? I like ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Passing of La Belle
Your poem is extremely good, very moving I only found one issue Then one day came the war. this line doesnt really flow with the rest of your lines It ...
Sep 1, 2008