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Hey, creativity! The dark tone of the poem really sets the mood from the first line. You've managed to use some great rhyming here and I simply love the entire ...

Hey Renn! This poem is so great and expressive. The title is so interesting and it drives me right down to the last line. Your does have a lot of ...

Hey Ahmad! I love this story and how you've described every single detail. You start by introducing Gerry, a busy woman who uses the train for the first time. The ...

Hey, Kattie! I like poems with positive outlook and a good message of hope. The only nitpick for me is that I find it to be to plain and drab. ...

Hey creativity! I'm so amazed at this piece and seeing as you've done it a long time ago, I'm even more impressed at the way you've managed to pull together ...

Hey, sarebear! This was really fun to read and the descriptions of anticipation just leaped from my computer screen. Great work and keep those creative juices flowing! Murtuza :)

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Hey Deanie, This poem sounds a lot like one that I've written and I really love the way that you've managed to bind all those emotions of feeling lost and ...

Deanie :D I can so empathize with you on this! For me, chocolate is just sweet love and warmness and I feel happy after having a good wrapper or maybe ...

Deanie! This is such a great poem! I'm so impressed with the use of the words and situation that you are trying to portray. The story you're telling here is ...

Scarlett! As promised, I am here to review! This poem is short indeed but really delves into Gabrielle's despair. However, it becomes a bit too repetitive when you keep say ...

Hey, Mello! I love this poem a lot. I don't understand a single word of Spanish but I'm glad you translated the poem into English as well because this is ...

murtuza Now that was fun! xD

Hey creativity! I thought that this was an excellent piece of art. I especially like the eyes that seem so deep and distinct. The nose and the moustache however, look ...

Hey there, form! This poem is really good and really delves into the subject really well. To live an existence worthy of a human being and living among God's wonderful ...