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I love this story! I can't wait to see where it goes from here! I agree with the previous comment about the errors. I love that this story gives the ...

I loved it! The only thing is that you need to have a space inbetween "come'ere. It should be "come here." I love Panic at the Disco and good luck ...

Thanks! I got rid of some of the likes and substituted them for other things. Hope you like it!

Thanks for the advice! I went back through and edited some stuff. I hope to be adding more chapters soon!

Thanks! I took your suggestions and went back through it. I changed some things, and I added a more in depth back story for the main character!