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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Earth's Plight

    From the grasp of frost the riders came, Like earth-bound hail, (enter?) descending rain. Seas were drained and mountains razed. From works of beauty, (enter?) did they graze. Not beast, ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Nightmare

    pain a stab in the heart pain, a stab in the heart his eyes fully lifeless his eyes lifeless mix my blood with his to mix my blood with his ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Meanless Words

    I hate liers! I have to say no spelling mistakes, no punctuation misstakes. Over all a witty post, if you were telling that to your crush I would so be ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: .

    just backstabbed me and rocked my world, or what was left of it The next day at school; I did my best to look happy but not everything they did ...

    May 7, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: When dawn arrives

    [quote="*singerofthenight*"]Prologue Suddenly the patient started shaking uncontrollably then lay still. The life line went flat. “We? There is no we to it John.” She stated blandly, shaking her h

    May 7, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Indevor-band story

    She told me she did do as much spell check as she could infive min but se didn't get done...* I like how you tell us what your doing doring ...

    May 5, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Death At Love's Sight (P.G Rating)

    Ok if I wrote the story it would have gone a litle slower with more depth. Like instead of the girl just of no where kissing him (witch by the ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Firebomb

    Sorry I dont agree necisaraly witht the ast reveiw....I half agree You didn't spenf that much time on it Oh well But I still thought it was funny But hey ...

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Caterpillar Who Loved The Butterfly

    Wow, this was pretty original actually and I really liked it! It kind of reminded me of the Hungry Caterpillar, which is one of those books that you never forget, ...

    Apr 29, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: A girl named Revelation part 1

    ok I haven't read it all but Im using the first short sentence as a book mark....Ill read more in a bit *I promised..* :D -em *Oh ya I killed ...

    Apr 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Possession

    as said befor a diffrent way kinda halloweenish But for me sweemish..... I would so break up with my bf if he ever and I mean ever did that to ...

    Apr 2, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Cutter's Dread

    Hey that reminds me of one of the storys I wrote....this girl stood by a dark ally knowing that something was going to happen...something bad and Boo! out of nowhere ...

    Apr 1, 2008


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