myjaspercat

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

sorry about the transitions, I had to write a sonnet for school and I didn't really know how to make the transitions better with sticking with the style.

yeah breath was supposed to be breathe but I had already posted it when I caught the mistake.

yeah breath was supposed to be breathe but I had already posted it when I caught the mistake.

yeah breath was supposed to be breathe but I had already posted it when I caught the mistake.

yeah breath was supposed to be breathe but I had already posted it when I caught the mistake.

I will when I can

I totally get you with the wanting to be in books and all, don't worry your poetry skills will develop more with practice

good to hear that I didn't offend you, sometimes I worry about that. It's nice that you share your work no matter what, don't let anyone drag you down.

thank you for your review, I don't care how long they are the longer the better. Anyways, I have been taught to add commas were I want the reader to ...

any time and, I am glad I didn't offend you or anything, I tend to do that sometimes when I forget other people have feelings too. Anyways, the specifying characters ...

any time and, I am glad I didn't offend you or anything, I tend to do that sometimes when I forget other people have feelings too. Anyways, the specifying characters ...