mystogan

Okay how to begin.... This poem is one of those ones that is very clouded for me. Namely because i don't know the meaning behind or am unable to find ...

This is very sad and touching. It is a very good farewell. There is no words to explain the feeling that this leaves. For one thing this poem is so ...

Okay this is a good chapter. there is good info, nice description, the plot moves on and the dialogue is nice. everything has a good balance to it. I like ...

I was shocked at how short this was but then i read it and thought wow, i want to read more. In this short amount of writing you have created ...

hey there finally read the first chapter. Although it turns out i read the deleted first version when i first joined this website. Anyway there are many things going on ...

This was a very interesting start. I ca't believe i have been reading your novel all this time without actually reading this. Now that i have everything makes sense a ...

I was just thinking at the start of this chapter that this novel was beginning to die down for me and then boom. I am back on board again. This ...

Hey i just want to say that i can't find the prolouge or chapter 2 as you told me on the message??? Anyway onto the novel. I like it. As ...

I have to say this was one of the most interesting chapters for me. I read through this in a quick five minutes. I was so disappointed when it came ...

Ahhh, how sweet she describes the sun as custard, shows she think about food all the time, a very nice way to put it considering food is a luxury she ...

I barely get what this poem is trying to say but it has a certain beauty about it, that i can't shake. Also i am curious about why you put ...

this is a good start. Its a concept that has been explored before but very rarely. The idea of someone dying and then living on as a spirit can be ...

wow, i don't know what to say. I kind of feel guilty now. You asked for feedback and i don't have any apart from that it was amazing. I was ...

okay finally but i have to say as a fan i am disappointed. I get how it must be hard to move the plot on but you took the scene ...

she is really brave, if even something like that happened in the tiniest bit i would have run out of the house in two seconds. I have no shame in ...