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nadeanie2

  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: The Day I Made Everyone Hate Me

    This is so odd yet humorous and clever. I liked the fact that it's only 4 lines long but it was very effective and complete regardless of it's length. Your ...

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shapely

    Hi there :) Firstly, I would like to congratulate you on creating such a unique poetic piece. The way you have brought in the structure as the main topic of ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Perfect Shell

    This poem takes me to such a peaceful setting. The line "worn smooth by years of salty tides" was particularly beautiful, I loved the image of that in my head. ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Other » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The City of Stone

    This piece would defiantly be very interesting to see in a novel. It is very nerve wracking and tense and possesses power, rich, visual imagery. I think that you should ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Our Vision of Change

    This is a simple poem but heartwarming. It's truly brilliantly written. You have taken a sensitive subject that the people tend to brush off and mark unimportant and have brought ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The fill in the blank you forgot to fill

    This poem made me tear up. This is excellently put together and well thought out. I also think that this is most definitely publish-worthy. I love the lines:"The silence stones ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Scroll of a Writer's Life

    This is a very elegantly written poetic piece. I am very impressed with your vocabulary, you have expanded your word use way past dull and unexciting and have really made ...

    Jan 9, 2014


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