natalie

Hi Charlie! I really like this poem, I didn't knnow you wrote pieces like this. :D This imagery is beautiful and the style of poem is simple and easy to ...

I love the imagery used, the mathaphor inside the poem creates a good flow and an interesting picture. I like the simple emotion, it is easy to understand and simple ...

I like the relation to the poppies. it is a good link to make when writing about war. During the first two stanzas you relate to eyes twice, it can ...