natfunnybunny

To me, there are two parts of a short story. One is the part where things flow together, and the puzzle pieces fit together, and then there is the part ...

Guys, I fixed the paragraph thing, and took out some '...' so here's the some-what revised thingie, so no more critisizm on paragraphs people!

ok sorry guys, I know what you're thinking 'what happened to all the paragraphs?!' well, I'm kind of a write n go person, so i dont really pay attention. But ...

It’s raining. The only things I can feel are the tiny raindrops dousing my skin in a layer of water. Bags hung under my eyes from endless nights that could ...

ummmmmmmmmmm.......your probably gonna wanna slap me after this post, but that was a lil.....how do i say it?.....super confusing. it should be longer, it should be way more detail, etcetera ...

you have the most talent in a writer i have seen all my life. ive read over 75 books just this school year and about 1 or 2 matched up ...

In that one very section of my life, I only felt numbness. Everything around me was all a blur and nothing mattered. The alley way where I sat was cold ...