neko

I really really love this :D it has a nice flow and rythm, the repetition is used fantastically without being TOO repetetive :) "But we never did grow old. Or ...

I loved it :D I'm a major yaoi fangirl XD but the story was great, fun to read :) you're very talented. Keep it up :3 I can't wait for ...

This is great :) I can relate to this a lot, and I love the rhyming. I can hardly get a poem as long as this to rhyme and fit ...

I love this. There were a few parts that didnt flow too well, but the depth and emotion in this is amazing. Keep on writing, you have a great talent ...

I really like this and cant wait for the next one. I noticed, like others, that there are errors an grammar etc, but I quite liked the storyline and the ...

I really liked this. i see no real faults at all. please keep it up!