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“Please, one more second," ? not , I said Shouldn't you be building emotion? You epic failed if you were. Said is such a plain, boring word, void of all ...

pose. I could care less. posse. I couldn't care less. Awesome-ness NEVER! use something else! Cutesy Got to be kidding me? CUTESY!? HUH! NOOOOOO. Any word by that! its almost ...

noticed he had walked in Noticed he'd walked in His natural Raven – colored hair was catching the light, making it gleam Small r for raven, and try: His raven ...

Hello Icefire! Ah this is brilliant! The frigid night air whistled throughout the forest Through the forest A girl, dressed all in black, was darting from tree to tree, hardly ...

It is only short and most of what i want to say is already done... soo... Breathless Right we get the point - she makes him feel euphoric. Now get ...

First off - ah this is splendiferous (not a word.. but hey!) Well, his hippo ate the last bean, if we’re going to use that analogy. As said above, it ...

I hope you got my pm? Right: To begin with: slow down no need to rush. Use commas, use - and semi colans. I strongly recommend in the future you ...

Either an Asian, or somebody who likes Asians, or somebody who claims to be an Asian. [i have many friends who claim to be asian. Sad life i've got.]

Banned for being 2 years younger than me! Ha

Okay reviewing now but telling people you haven't edited turns people off... and you should've edited before posting, though so far i can't find anything major. Give me until tomorrow

I'd love that to be reviewed

Sorry if this sounds a little harsh. And because i gave you something of mine to review in 'review for food' threat, i decided it to be polite to do ...

No, it wouldn't bother me. It would tell me things about her though - she doesn't take care of herself being one. The choice of smoking or not smoking would ...

it has taught me a wider vocab, because when reading other people's works, i can see new words and i am then able to use them in my own works, ...

The title: Stepping Into Static The Genre: romance The link: It has vampires, it is a love story, mild language but nothing you have not heard before! There are more ...