niccy_v

Hmm... i've learnt to jot down seperate ideas for stories, and leave them at that. Beginning new stories apart from NaNo do not help!!! I could've easily gone 100,000 + ...

Okay yay ended on 90,197 Soooo 197 words over goal :) yay

I finished at 90,197

Righto on it! But i won't be here for a week so i have a whole week to dig my teeth into this. I have read 4 pages and it ...

I have it broken into more chapters now so not so labour-intensive. BRITISH Spelling: Color = colour realize = realise meter = metre center = centre ETCETERA. Please do not ...

bahaha it's actually really good. I think so. But uh - you might also want to add more onto the introducing of the music 'end part' and all that interaction. ...

And i failed to add, and i do agree with CastlesInTheSky... You have executed the story brilliantly. Throughout all the chapters there is nothing with Twilight, but you have owned ...

Okay i saw the little note not to crit but i thought i should alert you to the grammar/spelling mistakes and your major telling bits, when really, there should be ...

It has a good plot and i can see where it is heading, but you are taking things way too fast. You are rushing and there is no need to. ...

It was all right, but didn't reallyb catch my attention. Creeped Is not a word nice Is a horrible word I can feel my eyes popping out of my head. ...

I did not find it confusing. I read the plot and so i had a good idea. My crit is mainly just comments (i went wild on this i am ...

Ha now i know what they are

Aw it was good. Maybe in the future you would like to continue? Ah well, Krupp i think you should put up your latest piece here - it was great

Give people time. It's needing a lot of work, but still, i think you've pressed the fast forward and it's very jumpy. It's too fast and there is not much ...

Okay so this is good, but erm, Bubba + Roxy are dogs right? You need to let us know who is what and who is who because it was all ...