nikita

Well yes, i didn't notice it before, but anyway your review helped...

thank you for the inspiring reply. I'll really work on what you said....

I couldn't get quite that perfect flow to the rhymes. I know it's really a glaring problem. I'll make sure to improve on the rhyming part

I do have to work on the metaphors. Hopefully my next poem will be more descriptive:)

Thank you for the helpful review. I'll surely make the changes

Thank you for the suggestions:D

That was an amazing poem! My eyes filled with tears as i read it. You expressed every emotion and memory so beautifully and articulately that I could really feel the ...

Wow! Just wow!....This poem is absolutely mesmerizing. The way you explained your thoughts is really brilliant.The rhyme scheme is flawless and there is a uninterrupting flow to the poem. It ...

The last stanza is little rough. I couldn't give that perfect finalty to the poem. But I'll sure work on it. I appreciate your help:-)

This is a really great poem. Really makes one ponder. It does not consist of a regular rhyme scheme which is really amazing. Keep up the good work...

Thanks for your help...I'll be sure to make the necessary changes...

thanks for the criticism...its really helpful:D

It's truly a touching poem. Really painted the scenario for me.