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nishthabawa2896

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I don't know...

    hey I enjoyed this poem very much, however I found it a bit too repetitive in my opinion. I noticed you had a pattern being four lines then two that ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Eclipse

    hey i enjoyed this poem very much, however I found it a bit too repetitive in my opinion. I noticed you had a pattern with your rhymes being four lines ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Reflections of a Leaf in Winter

    This poem was very enjoyable! The theme of this poem was quite meaningful and it remained consistent throughout the whole poem. The first thing is that I believe adding stanzas ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i am no poet

    Hey this is really beautiful and nice poem. I must say that you have the potential to express yourself correctly with such a simple and understanding vocabulary. I believe that ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sweets

    HEY, i am glad to read such a nice and sweet poem.... i would like to tell you that you have written beautiful poem and you expressed the emotions really ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Free

    Hey..... nice way to present your thoughts and feeling which you have experienced...... I am glad that you explained your feelings in such a brief that usually takes paragraphs to ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Sanctuary

    HEY.... its a sweet and simple poem... short and expressed well... it is more like a description about how you feel and what you feel?? i love the poem and ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Boy of my dreams

    HEY.... this is a beautiful piece of work. i loved it. i really like the work which is associated to love and affection. i must say that you know that ...

    Apr 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Joy

    HEY.... you wrote well. i wish to see more expressive words and a bit of details too. it is a beautiful piece of work but looks incomplete. hope you are ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I Need Hope

    HEY, you expressed yourself well. i just wish to give you an advice, and apologize if you felt it wrong, i just want to say that try not to write ...

    Apr 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Fantasy Re: Poor Girl

    HEY.... you wrote an amazing poem!! I loved the way you portrayed a girl who has to do those things which she does not want do. I have felt that ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Untitled WIP - Prologue

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    HEY 
You wrote your words very wisely and am happy for the fact that your words made imagine each thing......... Everyone should write in a way that it should make ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When the Balcony Collapses

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    HEY You wrote your words very wisely and am happy for the fact that your words made imagine each thing......... Everyone should write in a way that it should make ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Be Gentle

    HEY dear you seem to be really feared in this poem..... it is nice but I would rather suggest you to not write negative as I am a psychology student ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer Irony

    HEY i really like this poetry as it seems that you really wanted to write something on nature.... i appreciate the fact that you initiated in a beautiful manner.... like ...

    Nov 30, 2015


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