nixonblitzen

I like this. It makes me think of an old grey man who has had a prolific writing career and is now a washed up, sickly hermit. However, I would ...

I feel humbled giving you any criticism. I love the mood of this piece. The descriptions are just amazing. Personally, I love fragments and I like your use of them. ...

Here's what I thought when I read this piece: "He sure says 'eleven-year-olds' a lot. Is this a flashback?" I got the feeling that the speaker was looking back on ...

I hate having hair in my face. But what I hate more is the way I look without bangs. So I tough it out. Whenever I get my bangs cut, ...

I like it. Ironic and makes me feel a bit annoyed. But in a good way. Not much to say, but here's what I've got: Hate me, hate me, and ...

I love this. It's effortless. The reader can feel himself transformed into the setting you create. I can feel the concrete under my feet and hear the hum of the ...

Unfortunately, no. But I have come close. I've always wanted to know how that works. The person below me hates thinking about the insides of bodies.

Wrong. I'm Mormon. The person below me would rather be a hunter-gatherer.

“No,” I answered. “Most of the dreams are different. They’re all on the same night, but he never says the same things, or does the same things. I only see ...

I think darko was unnecessarily harsh. This has real potential! Hand in his Warm, damp, and firm. Fingers curl. I don't understand this "fingers curl" line. It sounds like they ...

I read this yesterday, but I think I was only half paying attention. This is great! Really original and interesting and has a great voice. And once you know how ...

Is this right? When I read about what the wind was doing to the room, I imagined it was mirroring what was happening to the old man fishing. Did he ...

I like this poem. It makes me feel very sad. I just see a girl a girl A girl who's eyes are vacant of everything but sadness You can see ...

At first I just thought this was like To Build a Fire like Jack London, which I hate. But the more I read it, the more I liked it. I ...

This might sound harsh, but only because I think it has potential. Renee woke up with sweat over her. That’s damn nightmare she thought as she toss the covers away ...