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You're welcome, and thank you

Thank you for your review and time c:

Find me one metaphor.

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I used "beaut" because I felt like every writer/poet looks on their works with an intense affection and the ...

thank you for the review. I'm glad you could take the time to review this! You made a good point with the gone, gone gone thing to some degree. But ...

This doesn't really make any sense. Why is the ground made up of terror and tears? I don't really get what you're trying to get across. The whole poem really ...

It's okay

The last line does now :D

I suggest reading my response to SocialSuicide107 if you are confused or wondering what the point of this was lol

"One gets uninterested as they read on." Don't be coy. You got uninterested. Your feelings towards a work are not a generalized fact. The problem you have with this work ...

I overdid the eclipse moon and the fluorescent light because they're symbolic. Well, light is symbolic in this piece. The main character doesn't like the light - squinting near the ...

I'm glad you enjoyed the story (:

Thank you for taking the time to read this C: I'm glad you liked it!

me gusta.

Thank you very much for your review and time to read this (: