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  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Politics Re: Assorted thoughts of a politically minded teenager

    hiya! i know it's been a little while since this was published but i realized i hadn't gotten around to reviewing any of your stuff yet, so here i am! ...

    May 21
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Addicted Roundup Chap.2

    i really liked this piece, it was a very interesting follow-up from the last one. personally i really like that we jump to a new character, and them meeting in ...

    May 21
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Late Night

    what an interesting premise. i have to admit i don’t read a lot of sci-fi, but these characters seem really fun. J really reminded me of the androids from DBH ...

    May 20
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: Just like everyone else.

    'illegal aliens' is such a disgusting term. no matter what country you come from, we're all the same species. the fact that some people can think others are 'less than' ...

    May 20
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Addicted Roundup

    i spotted your recent review and wanted to check you out lol. the short description of this piece immediately drew me in and i’m glad it did. i really enjoy ...

    May 20
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Magic Shop- chapters one to three

    wow, this is definitely better than anything i wrote at your age. i especially like the twists, i can tell that’s one of your strengths. also autumn calling frogbert ‘kid’ ...

    May 20
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: caw, caw

    ö this is a really compelling piece. i'm usually a bit hesitant to leave reviews on poems because you can't really 'judge' them in the same way as prose, the ...

    May 18
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The forest watches

    this was really intriguing, i like your opening. sleep deprivation can really mess with a persons mind so it's makes a great premise for supernatural or paranormal stories. i also ...

    May 18
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Main Character Syndrome explained philosophically

    this was a great read. though this is something i've pondered myself, i've never actually seen anyone speak directly on "cringe", "main character syndrome" and the other things you touch ...

    May 18
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Loneliness

    you can really feel the emotion in this one. you mention a lot of things like sitting next to people and still feeling lonely that feel very nuanced. when you ...

    May 17
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Onion. A bizarre work of mine inspired by inabakumori's Lost Umbrella.

    this is definitely a unique concept. the story itself feels very heavily like a dream nearly all the way through, but i really like that you made it open to ...

    May 17
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Magical Door. Chapter 1-10

    this is a really interesting premise, i think. i like the shift from a seemingly 'normal' school with bullies and diaries to a huge, pink, sparkly door. i wonder if ...

    May 17
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: 7 Minutes Left -- 7:00|Part 3

    wow, this is taking a different turn than what i expected. to me it seemed from the earlier chapters like there was some imminent tragedy about to affect their dad, ...

    May 17
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Prime Target: chapter 2 -everywhere he went

    ARTHUR GODALMING!! sorry, that was just where my brain went as soon as i read arthur emerson. although i guess his name was technically arthur holmwood? i don't know, that ...

    May 13
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: 7 Minutes Left -- 7:00|Part 2

    hey! so i know it's been over a month since this was posted, but all the best reviewers are 'fashionably late'... right? anyway, i thought i'd pop in and deliver ...

    May 10


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