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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Anything...

    I like it!! I think that there are enough grammar nazi and crap picking this apart (no offence, of course) I didn't expect it much, I thought they did the ...

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bloodlust - Chapter One

    I like it. The only thing I would work on is that is sounds really...sharp. Like, technical almost. But since it's a vampire their minds are really calculating...but I like ...

    Feb 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Poem

    I would call it "Life's Meaning." I liked it...I can see why it won first place.

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: nvm 5

    Like the review above ^^ it does havea rather 'telling' quality, and there's quite a lot of it. Some of the low has issues, but I like it. It has ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Roma and Julius

    It was so cute! Yeah, like the others there were some issues with the rhythm, but if you added a couple words here or there, it's perfect. Love it!

    Jan 3, 2009


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price