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Hi guys! Thank you for reviewing my work. I edited it so I hope it's better.

Funny how when I try to get better I move ten steps back. My own personal hater, fighting an internal vendetta, negatively criticising. But the more I beat myself up, ...

Hi! I really liked your poem. I could feel the desire to find joy in the beauty that is surrounds us. I liked the use of colours too. All in ...

Hi again, I still miss the old poem but we have to make room for change. Anyway, I like your use of imagery and there is no negativity.

Hi' I know it has been like a year since I read the poem but it feels really different. Did you change your whole poem? I haven't seriously gone through ...

I second Lumi. This article is very useful. Thanks so much.

Hi. I really loved your poem. It was really sweet.Keep writing.

Hey! Your poem is interesting and it feels like your angry at the world or someone. Anyway, I like the use of acronyms standing for different things. I can picture ...

Hey guys! Thanks for your feedback. Snoink, I think you should come up with your own thief because in this world, there are a lot of people who steal different ...

I hope this can be called a poem :D Haven't you heard? The robber came So quietly, So slowly, With skill, And expertise. He stole. He climbed the custom made ...

you're so good. I love you're poem. It reminds me that sometimes we need silence to realise the small things.

I like it. I thought it was going to be another romance but there is a twist in events. I think you should write more because you've left me in ...

It's sketchy but I really hope you like it. Nena, I'm sorry I haven't written in a while. To be honest, I really couldn't get myself to write. I miss ...

I like it. I'm sort of writing a similar story so I'm excited to read your work. I only have one correction: I think we say 'underwear drawer' instead of ...

You're good but you need to work on your punctuation.