oceaniya

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The title is supposed to throw people of that's why I titled it that way. I don't sugar-coat any of my stories, but I do with the title. That in ...

Thank you! I should have Chapter 2 out n the next few weeks :3

Youre fine lol I think you can edit the comment but Im not sure

Thanks! I like writing short first chapters that pack a punch in one go. Thanks for correcting my grammar :3

Just to and like a footnote. I tried to sing it and the syllables kinda don't match up but it okie! But idk how to write a song so its ...

Yep we shall see

Thank you :)

I'm a new to writing so please let me know what to do and what not to do :P

Thank you so much! I was hoping that this would happen so I could correct it

This is amazing. You used your words very well. Although I suck at writing I know how to spot a good poem/story. With the lines like "soiled nails on my ...

I like this. It has a very good descriptive way of showing the "view point" or 'opinion' of the poem. Love it!!!!