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  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Where?

    Hi Chloe! I am thrilled you liked my work, and are interested in it becoming a comic. Unfortunately, I really don't have any money on me, and I don't have ...

    Oct 24
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Where?

    Thank you so much for your review!! I'm really glad the stream-of-consciousness style worked for you, especially since that was the main thing I was experimenting with when writing this. ...

    Sep 10
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Where?

    Thank you! I really appreciate that, especially the comment about my emotional writing. I'll definitely keep practicing and working on the discipline you mentioned. And thank you again for taking ...

    Sep 10
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Where?

    Thank you so much for the review, I will keep your tips in mind As for your fourth point, the thought was meant to be uncompleted to show her disorientation. ...

    Sep 10
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Where?

    Hey, First of all thank you for your review, you are right that without guidance potential is useless, that's why I posted it here. The main reason for the bad ...

    Sep 10


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